My online serial, “Rhea Randall and the Vampire Romance,” is now being released on a weekly basis every Friday. See you at JukePop!
I’m pleased to announce that Bill Oberst Jr. (The Retrieval, Circus of the Dead, and Criminal Minds) has agreed to play the lead role opposite rising star Dora Madison Burge (Friday Night Lights, That’s What I’m Talking About). You can read more about it (and some other great articles) at Horror Society and Haddonfield Horror. We also want to thank Dread Central for covering this new development, as well as Downright Creepy for featuring us in the IndieGoGo spotlight!
And, if you’re so inclined, please go to IndieGogo to contribute.
If you follow the blog, then you know I’m the associate producer of the upcoming feature “Night of the Babysitter,” which currently has an IndieGogo Campaign to raise the money we need to pay our crew upfront, rather than making them wait for a check.
We’ve broken 15% of our goal, and we’re fast approaching 20%. However, the more traction we get, the more exposure IndieGogo will give our page and the more funds we can raise!
If you’re planning to donate, please do so soon, and maybe we can reach a third of our funding by the end of the week!
Hey, all! I ended up only being able to complete the second exercise, but it turned out all right. Better to have one good exercise than two mediocre ones.
The airport was mostly vacant at such a late hour. Restaurant stalls and magazine vendors which had had lines of travelers earlier were now dark, gated and abandoned. Florescent lights flickered coldly above the gray tile flooring. The occasional footsteps would echo down the causeway, the rumbling of a wheeled-suitcase not far behind, before the sounds would be swallowed up by the carpet.
At the end of the terminal was the final boarding gate. A wall of glass stood between waiting passengers and the airfield. The black tarmac glinted in the dark, barely visible through the thick fog which pressed against the windows like some poisonous vapor. Tower lights blinked in the dark, their white and red luminescence fading into the surrounding mist. The glass offered little protection against the damp chill which invaded the boarding gate, causing the travelers to tremble under their overcoats and shawls.
A group of weary students were strewn about the floor near the windows. They slept on luggage, their faces and hands cold, pale, almost translucent. Other passengers stared out into nothingness, eyes glazed and unfocused. Aside from the rising and falling of chests with the faint breath of life, everyone was as still as a taxidermist’s project.
Little by little did movement begin. Passengers rose to board as the distorted voice of the loudspeaker summoned them. They moved without any urgency, limbs and minds both exhausted. One by one they stored their material possessions, one by one did they rest in their designated seat. After an uncertain length of time, all the strangers were lodged in their cramped plots, ready to begin their journey through the night and blackness.
If you decided to participate, share you results in the comments below! (You can either copy/paste or link to your own blog.) I look forward to reading your results!
I’ve recently been made Associate Producer of the up-and-coming avant garde horror film, Night of the Babysitter. The movie stars Dora Madison Burge (Friday Night Lights, Dexter) and will be shot on 16mm film in my hometown of Iowa City, IA.
Our IndieGogo campaign is up, so please check it out, donate what you can, and be sure to share!
Halloween is a holiday that is matched in my mind only by secularized-Christmas. To celebrate, in a nerdy kind of way, I’ve stolen some writing exercises from Josip Novakovich’s The Fiction Writer’s Workshop and added some Halloween spirit to them. I’ll post my results on October 31, and I invite everyone else to participate. You can either post your exercise in the comments section, or link it to your own blog. The exercises are below, and the italics are my own notes.
The following excerpts are from Fiction Writer’s Workshop, by Josip Novakovich.
Exercise One (Page 40)
Two Pages: Describe with care the most ordinary items you can think of. Look at them as though they were strange and unusual. Conversely, describe extraordinary things—meteors, rockets, and so on—in familiar language as just another stone or a piece of rolled sheet metal.
Objective: To learn how to control your distance from the objects you describe. If you are too close, you may not see the shape; if you are too far away, you may not see the details. Get into the habit of shifting the focus away from what would be your automatic focus, and you will see items in a fresh way. Practice the art of creating surprising details. Skip something obviously important and use something apparently unimportant.
Check: Do the ordinary objects sound fascinating? Do the extraordinary objects sound ordinary but interesting? If not, go back, and in the first half of the exercise give us the details that amaze, and in the second, details that make us take a good look. Everything you observe with interest should sound interesting.
Halloween Bonus: Try to make your ordinary object sound sinister, menacing, terrifying or uncanny in some way. For your extraordinary object, pick a typical Halloween item (ghost, zombie, gravestone, haunted house, severed limb(s), and make it sound familiar yet interesting.
Exercise Two (Page 42)
From Emily Bronte’s Wuthering Heights:
“One may guess the power of the north wind, blowing over the edge, by the excessing slant of a few stunted firs at the end of the house; and by a range of gaunt thorns all stretching their limbs one way, as if craving alms of the sun. […] The narrow windows are deeply set in the wall, and the corners defended with large jutting stones.”
The narrator completes the image of the house’s exterior with this description:
“A quantity of grotesque carving lavished over the front, and especially about the principal door, above which, among a wilderness of crumbling griffins, and shameless little boys, I detected the date “1500.””
Then she gives us the interior:
“Above the chimney were sundry villainous old guns, and a couple of horse-pistols, and, by way of ornament, three gaudily painted canisters disposed along its ledge. The floor was smooth, with stone: the chairs, high backed, primitive structures, painted green: one or two heavy black ones lurking in the shade. In an arch, under the dresser, reposed a huge, liver-colored bitch pointer surrounded by a swarm of squealing puppies; and other dogs haunted other recesses.”
One Page: Describe a setting for a horror story. You might pattern it after Emily Bronte’s example from above. Use the same lack of narrative distance as she does—let your narrator show us an ominous atmosphere through choice details, and let her tell us about it also, through slanted verbs and adjectives, just as Bronte does. The balance should be in favor of the details.
Objective: To practice using setting for a strong mood, using all your means, showing and telling.
Check: Did you evoke the mood? Although it’s all right if some of your imagery turns out to be stock horror stuff (howling winds), make sure that at least some of your images are original, new things that you haven’t seen before. (For example, Bronte uses this fresh, memorable image: “range of gaunt thorns all stretching their limbs one way, as if craving alms of the sun.”)
See you on October 31st!
A little while back I entered my novel, Rhea Randall and the Vampire Romance, into Black Hill Press’s “Summer Writing Project” via Juke Pop Serials. As of today, my book is in the top twelve most read novels!
So, if you haven’t yet, go check it out! (And, of course, remember to give it a +Vote!)