My online serial, “Rhea Randall and the Vampire Romance,” is now being released on a weekly basis every Friday. See you at JukePop!
If you follow the blog, then you know I’m the associate producer of the upcoming feature “Night of the Babysitter,” which currently has an IndieGogo Campaign to raise the money we need to pay our crew upfront, rather than making them wait for a check.
We’ve broken 15% of our goal, and we’re fast approaching 20%. However, the more traction we get, the more exposure IndieGogo will give our page and the more funds we can raise!
If you’re planning to donate, please do so soon, and maybe we can reach a third of our funding by the end of the week!
Hey, all! I ended up only being able to complete the second exercise, but it turned out all right. Better to have one good exercise than two mediocre ones.
The airport was mostly vacant at such a late hour. Restaurant stalls and magazine vendors which had had lines of travelers earlier were now dark, gated and abandoned. Florescent lights flickered coldly above the gray tile flooring. The occasional footsteps would echo down the causeway, the rumbling of a wheeled-suitcase not far behind, before the sounds would be swallowed up by the carpet.
At the end of the terminal was the final boarding gate. A wall of glass stood between waiting passengers and the airfield. The black tarmac glinted in the dark, barely visible through the thick fog which pressed against the windows like some poisonous vapor. Tower lights blinked in the dark, their white and red luminescence fading into the surrounding mist. The glass offered little protection against the damp chill which invaded the boarding gate, causing the travelers to tremble under their overcoats and shawls.
A group of weary students were strewn about the floor near the windows. They slept on luggage, their faces and hands cold, pale, almost translucent. Other passengers stared out into nothingness, eyes glazed and unfocused. Aside from the rising and falling of chests with the faint breath of life, everyone was as still as a taxidermist’s project.
Little by little did movement begin. Passengers rose to board as the distorted voice of the loudspeaker summoned them. They moved without any urgency, limbs and minds both exhausted. One by one they stored their material possessions, one by one did they rest in their designated seat. After an uncertain length of time, all the strangers were lodged in their cramped plots, ready to begin their journey through the night and blackness.
If you decided to participate, share you results in the comments below! (You can either copy/paste or link to your own blog.) I look forward to reading your results!
I’ve recently been made Associate Producer of the up-and-coming avant garde horror film, Night of the Babysitter. The movie stars Dora Madison Burge (Friday Night Lights, Dexter) and will be shot on 16mm film in my hometown of Iowa City, IA.
Our IndieGogo campaign is up, so please check it out, donate what you can, and be sure to share!
Halloween is a holiday that is matched in my mind only by secularized-Christmas. To celebrate, in a nerdy kind of way, I’ve stolen some writing exercises from Josip Novakovich’s The Fiction Writer’s Workshop and added some Halloween spirit to them. I’ll post my results on October 31, and I invite everyone else to participate. You can either post your exercise in the comments section, or link it to your own blog. The exercises are below, and the italics are my own notes.
The following excerpts are from Fiction Writer’s Workshop, by Josip Novakovich.
Exercise One (Page 40)
Two Pages: Describe with care the most ordinary items you can think of. Look at them as though they were strange and unusual. Conversely, describe extraordinary things—meteors, rockets, and so on—in familiar language as just another stone or a piece of rolled sheet metal.
Objective: To learn how to control your distance from the objects you describe. If you are too close, you may not see the shape; if you are too far away, you may not see the details. Get into the habit of shifting the focus away from what would be your automatic focus, and you will see items in a fresh way. Practice the art of creating surprising details. Skip something obviously important and use something apparently unimportant.
Check: Do the ordinary objects sound fascinating? Do the extraordinary objects sound ordinary but interesting? If not, go back, and in the first half of the exercise give us the details that amaze, and in the second, details that make us take a good look. Everything you observe with interest should sound interesting.
Halloween Bonus: Try to make your ordinary object sound sinister, menacing, terrifying or uncanny in some way. For your extraordinary object, pick a typical Halloween item (ghost, zombie, gravestone, haunted house, severed limb(s), and make it sound familiar yet interesting.
Exercise Two (Page 42)
From Emily Bronte’s Wuthering Heights:
“One may guess the power of the north wind, blowing over the edge, by the excessing slant of a few stunted firs at the end of the house; and by a range of gaunt thorns all stretching their limbs one way, as if craving alms of the sun. […] The narrow windows are deeply set in the wall, and the corners defended with large jutting stones.”
The narrator completes the image of the house’s exterior with this description:
“A quantity of grotesque carving lavished over the front, and especially about the principal door, above which, among a wilderness of crumbling griffins, and shameless little boys, I detected the date “1500.””
Then she gives us the interior:
“Above the chimney were sundry villainous old guns, and a couple of horse-pistols, and, by way of ornament, three gaudily painted canisters disposed along its ledge. The floor was smooth, with stone: the chairs, high backed, primitive structures, painted green: one or two heavy black ones lurking in the shade. In an arch, under the dresser, reposed a huge, liver-colored bitch pointer surrounded by a swarm of squealing puppies; and other dogs haunted other recesses.”
One Page: Describe a setting for a horror story. You might pattern it after Emily Bronte’s example from above. Use the same lack of narrative distance as she does—let your narrator show us an ominous atmosphere through choice details, and let her tell us about it also, through slanted verbs and adjectives, just as Bronte does. The balance should be in favor of the details.
Objective: To practice using setting for a strong mood, using all your means, showing and telling.
Check: Did you evoke the mood? Although it’s all right if some of your imagery turns out to be stock horror stuff (howling winds), make sure that at least some of your images are original, new things that you haven’t seen before. (For example, Bronte uses this fresh, memorable image: “range of gaunt thorns all stretching their limbs one way, as if craving alms of the sun.”)
See you on October 31st!
Chapter One of my teen novel is up and available for viewing! Be sure to go onto JukePop Serials, check it out, and give it a +Vote if you like what you see. (I need votes to keep my serial up and running!)
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Next chapter will be up on Tuesday or Wednesday, so stay tuned!
Sorry this is in late–bunch of crazy stuff came up this weekend. Regardless, here’s the conclusion to last week’s “Romantic Beginning.” This exercise is another from Novakovich, but it didn’t have to have anything to do with the previous exercise. The point of this one was to work with foreshadowing through environment, and I decided to use the same characters given the prompt for this exercise.
Rachel went to work that morning with an uneasy feeling in her stomach. Lisa had been feeling ill herself, and stayed home that day—in fact, she hadn’t even gotten out of bed to kiss Rachel goodbye. Rachel decided she should maybe try to take off work early, so she could get home and take care of her girlfriend.
After lunch, when the ill feeling in her gut didn’t subside, Rachel left work even earlier than she had planned to. On her way home, she stopped off at the store for some canned soup. Neither of them would feel like cooking tonight, and the soup would soothe Rachel’s stomach and Lisa’s cold. Rachel thought about calling home to see if there was anything else Lisa needed, but decided against it. If Lisa was napping, waking her up wouldn’t help her get better.
Brian’s car was parked by the curb when Rachel pulled into the driveway. She shook her head. Lisa had once again conned Brian into doing some favor for her—probably bringing her lunch—and had managed to trick him into some chores before he got a chance to escape. At least Rachel managed to arrive on time and save him from doing all their housework.
She was surprised to find the front door locked. While she was fumbling for her keys, she heard Barry White slip through the door. Odd choice of music to play when cleaning a house . . . and why did they have it so loud? Could Lisa rest with all that noise?
Rachel unlocked and opened the door. Something seemed off, but she couldn’t detect what at first. A glance downwards showed rose petals on the beige carpet, scattered in a trail leading to the bedroom. Rachel followed the trail partway, thinking the petals were for her, when she noticed a man’s shirt on the back of the couch. She could hear a few of Lisa’s excited squeals over the Barry White, the kind she made when she was about to . . .
Rachel had a strong urge to walk into the bedroom and catch them together. That would be one hell of a confrontation. But—always the rational one—she knew seeing Brian and Lisa like that would cut her deep. It would hurt her far more than it hurt them.
So Rachel set down her things, made some tea for her stomach, and quietly sipped it at the dining room table. Given Lisa’s decibels, they’d be done soon enough. That’s when Rachel would send Brian on his way, and have a serious talk with her partner.
Rachel wondered at her own calm, and then had to ask herself: did she really love Lisa as much as she thought she had? Or was she just a stupid first crush?